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She’s a pretty girl
with her big brown eyes
and blonde hair
her soft red lips
that smell like cherries
and her fingernails
always polished
Yes she is

But is she still pretty
without her makeup
and her confidence
what would she look like
if she would be just a girl?

When she was younger
‘bout two years ago
she wasn’t skinny
not at all
neither was she happy
and she didn’t have a friend
she was shy
and no one liked her
because she wasn’t special
she was just a girl

Then she discovered
the unwritten rules
that tell
people like her
if she acts happy
all the time

So she did

People noticed it
and she wasn’t average anymore
she had discovered a lifesaving secret
and she now was becoming popular
she had a boyfriend
and a lot of friends
people talked about her
though she didn’t talk about them
and she was the new queen
no one remembered the old her
like she was long ago

she walks around
and she sees another girl
with beautiful brown eyes
and splendid blonde hair
she got lovely red lips
and elegant fingernails

she stops
and looks at this girl
that stares back
she can tell her the unwritten rules
so she could be happier
but she doesn’t
‘cause she wants to keep it

she is very pretty
everyone knows
though she is the same
she’s still just a girl
something ‘bout her
makes her special
maybe her personality
or maybe she knows something
other girls don’t know
maybe there’s a secret
for being popular
Dunno if it's true, because I'm not popular :)
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angelxarchive Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Professional General Artist
"Dunno if it's true, because I'm not popular" haha, I honestly think popular people are good at socializing, which I suck at.
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retorra Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:) yeah I'm pretty shy so I understand
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angelxarchive Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Professional General Artist
Yeah, same here. I suck at starting and continuing conversations
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retorra Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah that's a problem, but when you know what to talk about, it's very easy :)
well I hope you have some friends on dA
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angelxarchive Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Professional General Artist
Thank you! I think I made a ton of amazing people here on DA. One of them even being an amazing artist! But, yeah, I totally get what you mean.
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